Technical paper corrections/feedback | English homework help

This is a paper I submitted and got feedback on it , looking for someone to do the corrections to the paper.

Feedback

 Based on the work done here, it would seem that you are on your way to a successful report. I would just go back to this outline, before you start drafting, and add in any remaining visuals, as well as your research if you haven’t incorporated it yet. That will make your drafting life much easier. As you do, be sure to discuss why each source is credible when you present it to your reader. 

Below is the paper that needs these corrections 

I also uploaded the Original PDF instructions for the paper.

Leave a Reply